I like this piece a lot I think it has great potential. Honestly I’m a little unclear of where you’re trying to go with this. “Around lunchtime i believe i went for a fun to boost my cardio the whole time i just thought of what the fans would think or what the other kid i was facing was thinking” I like the imagery here showing what your thought process was before the fight. As a reader I was left wondering how you made out in the fight.